Epic festival feedback

We received feed back form the epic festival, the place we previewed the rough draft of our music video. We have been informed that we have a great intro as well as a good timing for the dancing that fits in with the music. Furthermore we were told the steve bit was good and made for interesting viewing however the ending wasn't the best although this being only a rough draft will be fixed by the real music video.

Rough draft for Epic Festival.

This is our rough draft, for epic festival. However our teacher came to us on the 9th of november and told us the audience of the epic festival has changed to 11 year olds. Therefore we have to mute some profane words in the draft we are using. We have done this by muting it, and exporting a new video.

Featured below, very similar however sampling the clean edit.